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  1. ascarde on Chapter 3 Sun 26 Jul 2020 05:31AM UTC

    Hi! Would adding a tab at the start of each paragraph work? I have been trying to shorten them but, with some, I feel like the flow would be stunted if I break them.

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    1. Guest (Guest) on Chapter 3 Wed 29 Jul 2020 07:20PM UTC

      That would be good! Also I noticed you have all the text justified, it might be easier to read if it was defaulted/justified left.

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      1. ascarde on Chapter 3 Mon 17 Aug 2020 11:33PM UTC

        Thank you for the suggestion! I tried to do that in the new chapter. I will try to keep it up on most of the following chapters, but I am not a fan of unjustified text, and sometimes my anxiety kicks in and the clear margins make me feel better. I do promise to keep putting the tab at the start of every paragraph, so please let me know if it works. :)

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