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  1. kiwi (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 07 Mar 2017 04:18AM UTC

    The changes are Great! I would say that the fact that Gin or vodka never confrimed their kill as ridiculous. For a guy who is so smart to never make sure Shinichi name was in the press as missing is a plot hole. The realistic spin makes the characters more believable and I look forward to the darker storyline.

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    1. dreamingfifi on Chapter 1 Tue 07 Mar 2017 08:41AM UTC

      I have a headcanon that the heart stops beating during the transformation, so if they checked his pulse, they would believe he was dead. Then they run off before the transformation gets really obvious. Shinichi is unconscious by that point though, so I couldn't work that in yet. Maybe when Sherry shows up, I can bring this up.

      I'm glad that you're enjoying this story! I hope it continues to live up to your praise!

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